Screw what Black said, I think it's fine the way it is! Kagome is hard to draw (sometimes XD) and I really like how you drew this! Her expression is what I love best about it ^_^ Keep up the good work!

hmmm, i see a lot of kag pics, and yours is kind of average. i won't rate it. for kag, you need to make it special soemhow, this is where pens alone don;y cut it.